I’m excited to be one of the
contributing authors for Sand in Our Shorts. My writing spans several
genres, but most are historical mysteries with paranormal elements and time
travel. While I can research settings for modern characters with ease, trying
to authentically capture the past takes time and research—and a bit of creativity.
I didn’t start applying all of the senses to my writing right away. The
technique has evolved with time and has helped me create accurate and
interesting settings.
My books are set locally where I
am surrounded by the history of America. As a hands-on person, I can really get
“into” my work. This has included shadowing a brewer for several sessions to
learn the essence of his job, visiting naval museums to study a German warship,
and following a beekeeper during harvest. I’ve developed a method of
incorporating the tedious task of research with the fun part of “experiencing”
it through the five senses. This is especially helpful to “show, not tell” my
readers.
For example, Colonial
Williamsburg and Yorktown, both of which are featured in some of my stories,
have restored sites that mirror the locations some of my time travelers visit.
I live not far from the beach and
have found secluded coves that match the settings I imagine for a future pirate
or seafaring story. My photo of the fog covering the horizon yet leaving the
beach and trees visible will help me recreate the scene.
It is a short drive to
Washington, DC, or a train ride to New York City to capture the big city
elements as well as the historical aspects of both cities.
Every trip engages the five
senses, and sometimes what I call my “sixth” sense—when I seem able to breathe
the very essence of my characters or setting through my research. Sometimes,
however, my imagination does a pretty good job of conjuring up images of a
location or setting before I’ve even seen it.
SIGHT
I like to see the sights of my
settings, as close as possible to the real thing. My research journeys have
taken me to 18th-century manor houses, Victorian mansions, and historic
settlements to see what the homes and buildings of the past looked like. Visits
to breweries, distilleries, and old speakeasies have been integral to my
research for my True Spirits Trilogy.
When I visit a site that captures
what my imagination is creating, I take a photo to remember details later. What
might the characters’ clothes look like? From the deerskin-clad Native American
to the Colonial soldier, from the Victorian hostess to the 1920s flapper, from
the modern firefighter’s turnout gear to the business suit of the female
executive, descriptions need to be accurate.
Live demonstrations at
battlefields depicted the size and operations of cannons, the outdoor cooking
conditions, and the tiny tents nine soldiers had to share.
Colonial pubs, wine cellars, and
tasting rooms often capture the settings of the period, with brick walls,
candles in lanterns and sconces, wooden benches, and tables. Sandy beaches, old
forests, farmland, and fields capture the essence of nature when you stand in
front of any of these locations and your senses take in your surroundings.
SOUND
I’ve been to Native American
Indian Powwows, Royal Tattoos, and colonial reenactments to capture the sounds
of Indian drums, the swirl of bagpipes, and the thunder of cannons, and I want
my reader to experience it too.
Did the native drumbeats send my
heart racing as the warrior in war paint approached? It did when I imagined I
was a settler facing the unfamiliar sights unfolding in front of me.
Did the swirl of bagpipes put me
in the same mood as my characters of Scottish descent? It did when I “joined”
their family celebration of Hogmanay. Did that cannon boon put me in the middle
of the battle of Yorktown? You bet it did.
Does silk cloth rustle with
movement? Does it squish or scrape like taffeta? A minute of my time (not
counting an hour to find said materials) can give me the exact sensation I want
to portray in the right scene.
SMELL
What does gunpowder smell like
after a gun has been discharged?
How do I describe the salty smell
of the ocean on a hot summer day without going to the beach and concentrating
on that single sense? What does a raw fish smell like after sitting on the
shore for hours in the hot sun? How does freshly cut grass compare to wet hay
after a storm?
Does that decadent smell of
coffee bring a sense of relief to battle-worn soldiers or a contemporary
character needing the jumpstart ahead of a busy day? How about the aroma of
fresh-baked bread in a bakery? Or the smell of sandwiches and fruit when children
open their lunches in a schoolroom?
For romantic elements, what kinds
of perfume or cologne do the characters wear? Is it a flowery scent for her, a
musky, woodsy smell for him?
Can you capture the scent of a
building—the cold, mold in a dank basement, the wooden floors of an old butcher
shop mixed with the overwhelming odor of meat?
TASTE
I want to know about the foods my
characters eat, whether they are modern or historical. Is the roast fork tender
or tough as leather?
How did the oysters from the
James River of Virginia taste to the Native American Indians, or how haggis tastes
to a Scotsman, or the dry, hard biscuits called “tack” that were sometimes the
colonial soldiers’ only food? What foods have been a staple throughout the
centuries?
Does whiskey (with or without the
e, depending on where it comes from) really burn if you take a swig? What kinds
of barrels enhance the flavor of a good, spirited drink, and does it make a
difference?
Did freshly churned butter taste
like the butter we buy from the store? I’ve learned that honey has different
tastes if the hives are located next to other agricultural fields.
Does the character have the taste
of blood in his or her mouth after being injured? Is it metallic or coppery?
I want to see and taste what my
characters taste in order to describe it well.
FEEL (TOUCH)
How does a newborn baby’s skin
compare to the aged hands of its grandparent?
What does rough wool feel like to
the upper-class woman who has fallen on hard times and no longer wears velvet
or cashmere? How about that silk mentioned earlier–—can you help your reader
feel it in your description?
Does the food your character is
eating have a flavor or texture that can alter their experience? An unexpectedly sour taste, chewing on a
tough piece of meat, or stale bread can all enhance your story.
The soft fluff of the fiber and
the prickly scratch of the bracts of the boll presented two extremes to the
difficult harvesting of this crop, which will be a feature of a future
historical series.
BREATHING
I like to think of a different
kind of “sixth sense”—the effort to “breathe” in the atmosphere of the
settings, and for a brief moment, live like my characters. And hopefully, so
will my readers.
Using all of my senses to
research my stories has become interesting and fun. I’m resigned to one fact,
though. When I’m creating my ghosts and time travel events, I have to rely
solely on my imagination for that!